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Test 9 · ★★ · Persuasive letters, newspaper articles and diaries

Mia writes a persuasive letter: «Give us a pet hamster. It's good.» How could she make it more persuasive?

Mova's choice: option 1 · The right answer: option 3 · wrong ✗ · Who acts: Mia, hamster · What happens: write, give, be, make · To what, where: persuasive letter, pet hamster, us, hamster

This is test 9 · ★★ of lesson 24 «Persuasive letters, newspaper articles and diaries» of the English course of Mova's primary school. The page gives the question's syntax tree — a dependency tree in the style of Universal Dependencies — and its pragmatics clause by clause, then the 4 options as the student saw them, each with its tree and pragmatics. Every text is parsed by Mova itself. How the student answered it, with the score of every option and why: the test at school.

The question

Sentence 1: Mia writes a persuasive letter: «Give us a pet hamster.

nsubjdetamodobjpunctpunctconjiobjdetcompoundobjpunctrootMiaPROPNwritesVERBaDETpersuasiveADJletterNOUN:PUNCT«PUNCTGiveVERBusPRONaDETpetNOUNhamsterNOUN.PUNCT
The words, one row each (CoNLL-U)
#wordlemmaUPOSfeaturesheadrelation
1MiaMiaPROPNNumber=Sing2 writesnsubj
2writeswriteVERBMood=Ind Number=Sing Person=3 Tense=Pres VerbForm=Finrootroot
3aaDETDefinite=Ind PronType=Art5 letterdet
4persuasivepersuasiveADJDegree=Pos5 letteramod
5letterletterNOUNNumber=Sing2 writesobj
6::PUNCT_8 Givepunct
7««PUNCT_8 Givepunct
8GivegiveVERBVerbForm=Inf2 writesconj
9uswePRONCase=Acc Number=Plur Person=1 PronType=Prs8 Giveiobj
10aaDETDefinite=Ind PronType=Art12 hamsterdet
11petpetNOUNNumber=Sing12 hamstercompound
12hamsterhamsterNOUNNumber=Sing8 Giveobj
13..PUNCT_2 writespunct
#verbtense, moodwhowhat, whomto whomwherewhenotherroles by
1writepresentMiaa persuasive lettervn scribble-25.2-1 «NP V NP»: agent=Agent letter=Theme
2give in a quoteinfinitiveMia not said herea pet hamsterusvn give-13.1-1 «NP V NP-Dative NP»: agent=Agent we=Recipient hamster=Theme

One row per clause the reader finds. «not said here»: a role filled from the clause above. «roles by»: a VerbNet class and frame when one fits the verb, else the reader's rules on the tree.

Sentence 2: It's good.»

nsubjcoppunctpunctrootItPRON'sAUXgoodADJ.PUNCT»PUNCT
The words, one row each (CoNLL-U)
#wordlemmaUPOSfeaturesheadrelation
1ItitPRONCase=Nom Gender=Neut Number=Sing Person=3 PronType=Prs3 goodnsubj
2'sbeAUXMood=Ind Number=Sing Person=3 Tense=Pres VerbForm=Fin3 goodcop
3goodgoodADJDegree=Posrootroot
4..PUNCT_3 goodpunct
5»»PUNCT_3 goodpunct
#verbtense, moodwhowhat, whomto whomwherewhenotherroles by
1ispresenthamstergood propertytree rules

Sentence 3: How could she make it more persuasive?

advmodauxnsubjobjadvmodxcomppunctrootHowADVcouldAUXshePRONmakeVERBitPRONmoreADVpersuasiveADJ?PUNCT
The words, one row each (CoNLL-U)
#wordlemmaUPOSfeaturesheadrelation
1HowhowADVPronType=Int4 makeadvmod
2couldcouldAUXVerbForm=Fin4 makeaux
3sheshePRONCase=Nom Gender=Fem Number=Sing Person=3 PronType=Prs4 makensubj
4makemakeVERBVerbForm=Infrootroot
5ititPRONCase=Acc Gender=Neut Number=Sing Person=3 PronType=Prs4 makeobj
6moremoreADVDegree=Cmp7 persuasiveadvmod
7persuasivepersuasiveADJDegree=Pos4 makexcomp
8??PUNCT_4 makepunct
#verbtense, moodwhowhat, whomto whomwherewhenotherroles by
1makecouldMiahamsterpersuasive propertyvn build-26.1-1 «NP V NP»: agent=Agent it=Product

The options

Option 1 · ← Mova's choice

Write it all in capitals

objdetcaseoblrootWriteVERBitPRONallDETinADPcapitalsNOUN
The words, one row each (CoNLL-U)
#wordlemmaUPOSfeaturesheadrelation
1WritewriteVERBMood=Imp VerbForm=Finrootroot
2ititPRONCase=Acc Gender=Neut Number=Sing Person=3 PronType=Prs1 Writeobj
3allallDETPronType=Tot2 itdet
4ininADP_5 capitalscase
5capitalscapitalNOUNNumber=Plur1 Writeobl
#verbtense, moodwhowhat, whomto whomwherewhenotherroles by
1writeimperativeyou not said hereitcapitalsvn scribble-25.2-1 «NP V NP PP.destination»: agent=Agent it=Theme in capital=Destination

Option 2

Add «Dear Diary» at the start of the letter

punctamodobjpunctcasedetoblcasedetnmodrootAddVERB«PUNCTDearADJDiaryPROPN»PUNCTatADPtheDETstartNOUNofADPtheDETletterNOUN
The words, one row each (CoNLL-U)
#wordlemmaUPOSfeaturesheadrelation
1AddaddVERBMood=Imp VerbForm=Finrootroot
2««PUNCT_4 Diarypunct
3DeardearADJDegree=Pos4 Diaryamod
4DiaryDiaryPROPNNumber=Sing1 Addobj
5»»PUNCT_4 Diarypunct
6atatADP_8 startcase
7thetheDETDefinite=Def PronType=Art8 startdet
8startstartNOUNNumber=Sing1 Addobl
9ofofADP_11 lettercase
10thetheDETDefinite=Def PronType=Art11 letterdet
11letterletterNOUNNumber=Sing8 startnmod
#verbtense, moodwhowhat, whomto whomwherewhenotherroles by
1add speech: assertimperativeyou not said hereDear Diarythe start of the lettervn mix-22.1-2 «NP V NP»: agent=Agent diary=Patient
2startthe letternom start «event transitive»: of=patient

Option 3 · ✓ the right answer

Give reasons, like «it teaches us to care»

objpunctmarkpunctnsubjadvclobjmarkparataxispunctrootGiveVERBreasonsNOUN,PUNCTlikeSCONJ«PUNCTitPRONteachesVERBusPRONtoPARTcareVERB»PUNCT
The words, one row each (CoNLL-U)
#wordlemmaUPOSfeaturesheadrelation
1GivegiveVERBMood=Imp VerbForm=Finrootroot
2reasonsreasonNOUNNumber=Plur1 Giveobj
3,,PUNCT_7 teachespunct
4likelikeSCONJ_7 teachesmark
5««PUNCT_7 teachespunct
6ititPRONCase=Nom Gender=Neut Number=Sing Person=3 PronType=Prs7 teachesnsubj
7teachesteachVERBMood=Ind Number=Sing Person=3 Tense=Pres VerbForm=Fin10 careadvcl
8uswePRONCase=Acc Number=Plur Person=1 PronType=Prs7 teachesobj
9totoPART_10 caremark
10carecareVERBMood=Imp VerbForm=Fin1 Giveparataxis
11»»PUNCT_1 Givepunct
#verbtense, moodwhowhat, whomto whomwherewhenotherroles by
1giveimperativeyou not said herereasonstree rules
2teach speech: other in a quotepresentitusvn transfer_mesg-37.1.1-1-1 «NP V NP.recipient»: agent=Agent we=Recipient
3care in a quoteto-infinitivevn care-88.1-1 «NP V»: agent=Experiencer

Option 4

Make it shorter still

objxcompadvmodrootMakeVERBitPRONshorterADJstillADV
The words, one row each (CoNLL-U)
#wordlemmaUPOSfeaturesheadrelation
1MakemakeVERBMood=Imp VerbForm=Finrootroot
2ititPRONCase=Acc Gender=Neut Number=Sing Person=3 PronType=Prs1 Makeobj
3shortershortADJDegree=Cmp1 Makexcomp
4stillstillADV_1 Makeadvmod
#verbtense, moodwhowhat, whomto whomwherewhenotherroles by
1makeimperativeyou not said hereitstillshort propertyvn build-26.1-1 «NP.asset V NP»: agent=Asset it=Product

Text: the tests of Mova's primary school, written for Mova (world/data/school/), as the course runner gave them to the student. Trees: Mova's own parse — the en model on the CPU, when the site is built — not checked by a teacher; they may be wrong. Frames: Mova's frames reader (prag), each text read on its own. Elamur Cosmic License.

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