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Test 8 · Editing and redrafting

Your partner writes on your story: "It's bad." Why is it not useful?

Mova's choice: option 1 · The right answer: option 1 · right ✓ · Who acts: partner · What happens: write, be, not be · To what, where: story · Speech: someone speaks here

This is test 8 of lesson 43 «Editing and redrafting» of the English course of Mova's primary school. The page gives the question's syntax tree — a dependency tree in the style of Universal Dependencies — and its pragmatics clause by clause, then the 4 options as the student saw them, each with its tree and pragmatics. Every text is parsed by Mova itself. How the student answered it, with the score of every option and why: the test at school.

The question

Sentence 1: Your partner writes on your story: "It's bad."

nmod:possnsubjcasenmod:possoblpunctpunctnsubjcopparataxispunctpunctrootYourPRONpartnerNOUNwritesVERBonADPyourPRONstoryNOUN:PUNCT"PUNCTItPRON'sAUXbadADJ.PUNCT"PUNCT
The words, one row each (CoNLL-U)
#wordlemmaUPOSfeaturesheadrelation
1YouryourPRONCase=Gen Person=2 Poss=Yes PronType=Prs2 partnernmod:poss
2partnerpartnerNOUNNumber=Sing3 writesnsubj
3writeswriteVERBMood=Ind Number=Sing Person=3 Tense=Pres VerbForm=Finrootroot
4ononADP_6 storycase
5youryourPRONCase=Gen Person=2 Poss=Yes PronType=Prs6 storynmod:poss
6storystoryNOUNNumber=Sing3 writesobl
7::PUNCT_11 badpunct
8""PUNCT_11 badpunct
9ItitPRONCase=Nom Gender=Neut Number=Sing Person=3 PronType=Prs11 badnsubj
10'sbeAUXMood=Ind Number=Sing Person=3 Tense=Pres VerbForm=Fin11 badcop
11badbadADJDegree=Pos3 writesparataxis
12..PUNCT_11 badpunct
13""PUNCT_3 writespunct
#verbtense, moodwhowhat, whomto whomwherewhenotherroles by
1writepresentYour partneryour storyvn say-37.7-1 «NP V S-Quote»: agent=Agent clause=Topic
2is in a quotepresentpartnerbad propertytree rules

One row per clause the reader finds. «not said here»: a role filled from the clause above. «roles by»: a VerbNet class and frame when one fits the verb, else the reader's rules on the tree.

Sentence 2: Why is it not useful?

advmodcopnsubjadvmodpunctrootWhyADVisAUXitPRONnotPARTusefulADJ?PUNCT
The words, one row each (CoNLL-U)
#wordlemmaUPOSfeaturesheadrelation
1WhywhyADVPronType=Int5 usefuladvmod
2isbeAUXMood=Ind Number=Sing Person=3 Tense=Pres VerbForm=Fin5 usefulcop
3ititPRONCase=Nom Gender=Neut Number=Sing Person=3 PronType=Prs5 usefulnsubj
4notnotPARTPolarity=Neg5 usefuladvmod
5usefulusefulADJDegree=Posrootroot
6??PUNCT_5 usefulpunct
#verbtense, moodwhowhat, whomto whomwherewhenotherroles by
1not ispresentpartneruseful propertytree rules

The options

Option 1 · ← Mova's choice · ✓ the right answer

It doesn't say what or how to improve

nsubjauxadvmodobjccadvmodmarkccomprootItPRONdoesAUXn'tPARTsayVERBwhatPRONorCCONJhowADVtoPARTimproveVERB
The words, one row each (CoNLL-U)
#wordlemmaUPOSfeaturesheadrelation
1ItitPRONCase=Nom Gender=Neut Number=Sing Person=3 PronType=Prs4 saynsubj
2doesdoAUXMood=Ind Number=Sing Person=3 Tense=Pres VerbForm=Fin4 sayaux
3n'tnotPARTPolarity=Neg4 sayadvmod
4saysayVERBVerbForm=Infrootroot
5whatwhatPRONPronType=Int9 improveobj
6ororCCONJ_9 improvecc
7howhowADVPronType=Int9 improveadvmod
8totoPART_9 improvemark
9improveimproveVERBVerbForm=Inf4 sayccomp
#verbtense, moodwhowhat, whomto whomwherewhenotherroles by
1not say speech: assertpresent · do-supportItvn say-37.7-1-1 «NP V how S_INF»: agent=Agent clause=Topic
2improveto-infinitivevn other_cos-45.4 «NP V NP.patient»: agent=Agent what=Patient

Option 2

It is written in pen

nsubj:passaux:passcaseoblrootItPRONisAUXwrittenVERBinADPpenNOUN
The words, one row each (CoNLL-U)
#wordlemmaUPOSfeaturesheadrelation
1ItitPRONCase=Nom Gender=Neut Number=Sing Person=3 PronType=Prs3 writtennsubj:pass
2isbeAUXMood=Ind Number=Sing Person=3 Tense=Pres VerbForm=Fin3 writtenaux:pass
3writtenwriteVERBTense=Past VerbForm=Part Voice=Passrootroot
4ininADP_5 pencase
5penpenNOUNNumber=Sing3 writtenobl
#verbtense, moodwhowhat, whomto whomwherewhenotherroles by
1writepresent · passiveItpenvn scribble-25.2-1 «NP V NP PP.destination»: subject=Theme in pen=Destination

Option 3

It uses too many words

nsubjadvmodamodobjrootItPRONusesVERBtooADVmanyADJwordsNOUN
The words, one row each (CoNLL-U)
#wordlemmaUPOSfeaturesheadrelation
1ItitPRONCase=Nom Gender=Neut Number=Sing Person=3 PronType=Prs2 usesnsubj
2usesuseVERBMood=Ind Number=Sing Person=3 Tense=Pres VerbForm=Finrootroot
3tootooADV_4 manyadvmod
4manymanyADJDegree=Pos5 wordsamod
5wordswordNOUNNumber=Plur2 usesobj
#verbtense, moodwhowhat, whomto whomwherewhenotherroles by
1usepresentItmany wordsvn eat-39.1 «NP V NP»: agent=Agent word=Patient

Option 4

It is far too kind and much too detailed to read

nsubjcopadvmodadvmodccconjadvmodconjmarkxcomprootItPRONisAUXfarADVtooADVkindADJandCCONJmuchADJtooADVdetailedADJtoPARTreadVERB
The words, one row each (CoNLL-U)
#wordlemmaUPOSfeaturesheadrelation
1ItitPRONCase=Nom Gender=Neut Number=Sing Person=3 PronType=Prs5 kindnsubj
2isbeAUXMood=Ind Number=Sing Person=3 Tense=Pres VerbForm=Fin5 kindcop
3farfarADVDegree=Pos5 kindadvmod
4tootooADV_5 kindadvmod
5kindkindADJDegree=Posrootroot
6andandCCONJ_7 muchcc
7muchmuchADJDegree=Pos5 kindconj
8tootooADV_9 detailedadvmod
9detaileddetailedADJDegree=Pos5 kindconj
10totoPART_11 readmark
11readreadVERBVerbForm=Inf9 detailedxcomp
#verbtense, moodwhowhat, whomto whomwherewhenotherroles by
1ispresentItfar, kind propertytree rules
2betree rules
3betree rules
4readto-infinitivevn transfer_mesg-37.1.1-1 «NP V»: agent=Agent

Text: the tests of Mova's primary school, written for Mova (world/data/school/), as the course runner gave them to the student. Trees: Mova's own parse — the en model on the CPU, when the site is built — not checked by a teacher; they may be wrong. Frames: Mova's frames reader (prag), each text read on its own. Elamur Cosmic License.

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