Editing and redrafting, sentence 0
A first draft is like the first go at building a Lego model from your head: it stands up, but some bricks are in odd places, and editing is the second look that makes it sturdy and smart.
Who acts: first draft, first go, draft, bricks, editing, second look · What happens: be, build, stand up, make · To what, where: Lego model, head, odd places, second look, editing
This is a sentence of the lesson «Editing and redrafting» of the english course of Mova's primary school. The page gives its syntax tree — a dependency tree in the style of Universal Dependencies — and its pragmatics clause by clause: who acts (first draft, first go, draft, bricks), what happens, when and where, as Mova's frames read it from the tree.
The tree
The words, one row each (CoNLL-U)
| # | word | lemma | UPOS | features | head | relation |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | A | a | DET | Definite=Ind PronType=Art | 3 draft | det |
| 2 | first | first | ADJ | Degree=Pos NumForm=Word NumType=Ord | 3 draft | amod |
| 3 | draft | draft | NOUN | Number=Sing | 8 go | nsubj |
| 4 | is | be | AUX | Mood=Ind Number=Sing Person=3 Tense=Pres VerbForm=Fin | 8 go | cop |
| 5 | like | like | ADP | _ | 8 go | case |
| 6 | the | the | DET | Definite=Def PronType=Art | 8 go | det |
| 7 | first | first | ADJ | Degree=Pos NumForm=Word NumType=Ord | 8 go | amod |
| 8 | go | go | NOUN | Number=Sing | root | root |
| 9 | at | at | SCONJ | _ | 10 building | mark |
| 10 | building | build | VERB | Tense=Pres VerbForm=Part | 8 go | acl |
| 11 | a | a | DET | Definite=Ind PronType=Art | 13 model | det |
| 12 | Lego | Lego | PROPN | Number=Sing | 13 model | compound |
| 13 | model | model | NOUN | Number=Sing | 10 building | obj |
| 14 | from | from | ADP | _ | 16 head | case |
| 15 | your | your | PRON | Case=Gen Person=2 Poss=Yes PronType=Prs | 16 head | nmod:poss |
| 16 | head | head | NOUN | Number=Sing | 10 building | obl |
| 17 | : | : | PUNCT | _ | 19 stands | punct |
| 18 | it | it | PRON | Case=Nom Gender=Neut Number=Sing Person=3 PronType=Prs | 19 stands | nsubj |
| 19 | stands | stand | VERB | Mood=Ind Number=Sing Person=3 Tense=Pres VerbForm=Fin | 8 go | parataxis |
| 20 | up | up | ADP | _ | 19 stands | compound:prt |
| 21 | , | , | PUNCT | _ | 28 places | punct |
| 22 | but | but | CCONJ | _ | 28 places | cc |
| 23 | some | some | DET | PronType=Ind | 24 bricks | det |
| 24 | bricks | brick | NOUN | Number=Plur | 28 places | nsubj |
| 25 | are | be | AUX | Mood=Ind Number=Plur Person=3 Tense=Pres VerbForm=Fin | 28 places | cop |
| 26 | in | in | ADP | _ | 28 places | case |
| 27 | odd | odd | ADJ | Degree=Pos | 28 places | amod |
| 28 | places | place | NOUN | Number=Plur | 8 go | obl |
| 29 | , | , | PUNCT | _ | 35 look | punct |
| 30 | and | and | CCONJ | _ | 35 look | cc |
| 31 | editing | editing | NOUN | Number=Sing | 35 look | nsubj |
| 32 | is | be | AUX | Mood=Ind Number=Sing Person=3 Tense=Pres VerbForm=Fin | 35 look | cop |
| 33 | the | the | DET | Definite=Def PronType=Art | 35 look | det |
| 34 | second | second | ADJ | Degree=Pos NumForm=Word NumType=Ord | 35 look | amod |
| 35 | look | look | NOUN | Number=Sing | 28 places | conj |
| 36 | that | that | PRON | PronType=Rel | 37 makes | nsubj |
| 37 | makes | make | VERB | Mood=Ind Number=Sing Person=3 Tense=Pres VerbForm=Fin | 35 look | acl:relcl |
| 38 | it | it | PRON | Case=Acc Gender=Neut Number=Sing Person=3 PronType=Prs | 37 makes | obj |
| 39 | sturdy | sturdy | ADJ | Degree=Pos | 37 makes | xcomp |
| 40 | and | and | CCONJ | _ | 41 smart | cc |
| 41 | smart | smart | ADJ | Degree=Pos | 39 sturdy | conj |
| 42 | . | . | PUNCT | _ | 8 go | punct |
Pragmatics
No stored speech act for this sentence.
| # | verb | tense, mood | who | what, whom | to whom | where | when | other | roles by |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | is | present | a first draft | like the first go | tree rules | ||||
| 2 | build | gerund | the first go not said here | a Lego model | your head | vn build-26.1-1 «NP.asset V PP»: agent=Asset model=Product from head=Material | |||
| 3 | stand up | present | draft | vn assuming_position-50 «NP V»: agent=Agent | |||||
| 4 | is | present | some bricks | odd places and the second look | tree rules | ||||
| 5 | is a | present | editing | the second look | tree rules | ||||
| 6 | make | present | the second look | editing | sturdy property | vn build-26.1-1 «NP.asset V NP»: agent=Asset it=Product |
One row per clause the reader finds. «not said here»: a role filled from the clause above. «roles by»: a VerbNet class and frame when one fits the verb, else the reader's rules on the tree.
Licence: CC BY-SA 4.0, as the whole of Mova corpus 0.4, of which this treebank (the agreed school, mova-school-agreed-en.conllu) is part. The lessons were written for Mova's primary school. Sentence school:english:043-editing-and-redrafting.lesson:0.
The tree: Mova annot: Rust (en) → Haiku 5.5 (medium, Batches API) patches; gates UD 2.18; agreed by treeagree rules (Stanza, Trankit, spaCy trf): R5-strong ×2, R7-rel-agree ×4. The frames are read from the tree by Mova's frames reader (prag) when this page is built, the lesson read in order, so a pronoun may be resolved from an earlier sentence.
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