Test 1 · Editing and redrafting
Your mate goes "editing is for people who mess up, I'm too good for it." What is the truth?
Mova's choice: option 1 · The right answer: option 2 · wrong ✗ · Who acts: mate, editing, people, I, truth · What happens: go, be, mess up
This is test 1 of lesson 43 «Editing and redrafting» of the English course of Mova's primary school. The page gives the question's syntax tree — a dependency tree in the style of Universal Dependencies — and its pragmatics clause by clause, then the 4 options as the student saw them, each with its tree and pragmatics. Every text is parsed by Mova itself. How the student answered it, with the score of every option and why: the test at school.
The question
Sentence 1: Your mate goes "editing is for people who mess up, I'm too good for it."
The words, one row each (CoNLL-U)
| # | word | lemma | UPOS | features | head | relation |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Your | your | PRON | Case=Gen Person=2 Poss=Yes PronType=Prs | 2 mate | nmod:poss |
| 2 | mate | mate | NOUN | Number=Sing | 3 goes | nsubj |
| 3 | goes | go | VERB | Mood=Ind Number=Sing Person=3 Tense=Pres VerbForm=Fin | root | root |
| 4 | " | " | PUNCT | _ | 8 people | punct |
| 5 | editing | editing | NOUN | Number=Sing | 8 people | nsubj |
| 6 | is | be | AUX | Mood=Ind Number=Sing Person=3 Tense=Pres VerbForm=Fin | 8 people | cop |
| 7 | for | for | ADP | _ | 8 people | case |
| 8 | people | people | NOUN | Number=Plur | 3 goes | obl |
| 9 | who | who | PRON | PronType=Rel | 10 mess | nsubj |
| 10 | mess | mess | VERB | Mood=Ind Number=Plur Person=3 Tense=Pres VerbForm=Fin | 8 people | acl:relcl |
| 11 | up | up | ADP | _ | 10 mess | compound:prt |
| 12 | , | , | PUNCT | _ | 16 good | punct |
| 13 | I | I | PRON | Case=Nom Number=Sing Person=1 PronType=Prs | 16 good | nsubj |
| 14 | 'm | be | AUX | Mood=Ind Number=Sing Person=1 Tense=Pres VerbForm=Fin | 16 good | cop |
| 15 | too | too | ADV | _ | 16 good | advmod |
| 16 | good | good | ADJ | Degree=Pos | 10 mess | conj |
| 17 | for | for | ADP | _ | 18 it | case |
| 18 | it | it | PRON | Case=Acc Gender=Neut Number=Sing Person=3 PronType=Prs | 16 good | obl |
| 19 | . | . | PUNCT | _ | 8 people | punct |
| 20 | " | " | PUNCT | _ | 3 goes | punct |
| # | verb | tense, mood | who | what, whom | to whom | where | when | other | roles by |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | go | present | Your mate | vn disappearance-48.2-1 «NP V»: agent=Theme | |||||
| 2 | is in a quote | present | editing | for people | tree rules | ||||
| 3 | mess up in a quote | present | people | tree rules | |||||
| 4 | is in a quote | present | I | for editing; good property | tree rules |
One row per clause the reader finds. «not said here»: a role filled from the clause above. «roles by»: a VerbNet class and frame when one fits the verb, else the reader's rules on the tree.
Sentence 2: What is the truth?
The words, one row each (CoNLL-U)
| # | word | lemma | UPOS | features | head | relation |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | What | what | PRON | PronType=Int | root | root |
| 2 | is | be | AUX | Mood=Ind Number=Sing Person=3 Tense=Pres VerbForm=Fin | 1 What | cop |
| 3 | the | the | DET | Definite=Def PronType=Art | 4 truth | det |
| 4 | truth | truth | NOUN | Number=Sing | 1 What | nsubj |
| 5 | ? | ? | PUNCT | _ | 1 What | punct |
| # | verb | tense, mood | who | what, whom | to whom | where | when | other | roles by |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | is a | present | the truth | tree rules |
The options
Option 1 · ← Mova's choice
Editing means your writing was bad
The words, one row each (CoNLL-U)
| # | word | lemma | UPOS | features | head | relation |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Editing | editing | NOUN | Number=Sing | 2 means | nsubj |
| 2 | means | mean | VERB | Mood=Ind Number=Sing Person=3 Tense=Pres VerbForm=Fin | root | root |
| 3 | your | your | PRON | Case=Gen Person=2 Poss=Yes PronType=Prs | 4 writing | nmod:poss |
| 4 | writing | writing | NOUN | Number=Sing | 6 bad | nsubj |
| 5 | was | be | AUX | Mood=Ind Number=Sing Person=3 Tense=Past VerbForm=Fin | 6 bad | cop |
| 6 | bad | bad | ADJ | Degree=Pos | 2 means | ccomp |
| # | verb | tense, mood | who | what, whom | to whom | where | when | other | roles by |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | mean | present | Editing | vn intend-61.2-1 «NP V S»: agent=Agent | |||||
| 2 | is | past | your writing | bad property | tree rules | ||||
| 3 | write | your | nom writing «act transitive»: poss=agent |
Option 2 · ✓ the right answer
Even great writers edit; it's part of writing
The words, one row each (CoNLL-U)
| # | word | lemma | UPOS | features | head | relation |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Even | even | ADV | _ | 3 writers | advmod |
| 2 | great | great | ADJ | Degree=Pos | 3 writers | amod |
| 3 | writers | writer | NOUN | Number=Plur | 4 edit | nsubj |
| 4 | edit | edit | VERB | Mood=Ind Number=Plur Person=3 Tense=Pres VerbForm=Fin | root | root |
| 5 | ; | ; | PUNCT | _ | 8 part | punct |
| 6 | it | it | PRON | Case=Nom Gender=Neut Number=Sing Person=3 PronType=Prs | 8 part | nsubj |
| 7 | 's | be | AUX | Mood=Ind Number=Sing Person=3 Tense=Pres VerbForm=Fin | 8 part | cop |
| 8 | part | part | NOUN | Number=Sing | 4 edit | obl |
| 9 | of | of | ADP | _ | 10 writing | case |
| 10 | writing | writing | NOUN | Number=Sing | 8 part | nmod |
| # | verb | tense, mood | who | what, whom | to whom | where | when | other | roles by |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | edit | present | great writers | tree rules | |||||
| 2 | is a | present | it | part | of writing | tree rules |
Option 3
Only teachers are allowed to edit
The words, one row each (CoNLL-U)
| # | word | lemma | UPOS | features | head | relation |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Only | only | ADV | _ | 2 teachers | advmod |
| 2 | teachers | teacher | NOUN | Number=Plur | 4 allowed | nsubj:pass |
| 3 | are | be | AUX | Mood=Ind Number=Plur Person=3 Tense=Pres VerbForm=Fin | 4 allowed | aux:pass |
| 4 | allowed | allow | VERB | Tense=Past VerbForm=Part Voice=Pass | root | root |
| 5 | to | to | PART | _ | 6 edit | mark |
| 6 | edit | edit | VERB | VerbForm=Inf | 4 allowed | xcomp |
| # | verb | tense, mood | who | what, whom | to whom | where | when | other | roles by |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | allow | present · passive | teachers | vn allow-64.1-1 «NP V NP S»: subject=Beneficiary clause=Eventuality | |||||
| 2 | edit not said to happen | to-infinitive | teachers not said here | tree rules |
Option 4
Good writers never need a second look at their work, ever
The words, one row each (CoNLL-U)
| # | word | lemma | UPOS | features | head | relation |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Good | good | ADJ | Degree=Pos | 2 writers | amod |
| 2 | writers | writer | NOUN | Number=Plur | 4 need | nsubj |
| 3 | never | never | ADV | PronType=Neg | 4 need | advmod |
| 4 | need | need | VERB | Mood=Ind Number=Plur Person=3 Tense=Pres VerbForm=Fin | root | root |
| 5 | a | a | DET | Definite=Ind PronType=Art | 7 look | det |
| 6 | second | second | ADJ | Degree=Pos NumForm=Word NumType=Ord | 7 look | amod |
| 7 | look | look | NOUN | Number=Sing | 4 need | obj |
| 8 | at | at | ADP | _ | 10 work | case |
| 9 | their | their | PRON | Case=Gen Number=Plur Person=3 Poss=Yes PronType=Prs | 10 work | nmod:poss |
| 10 | work | work | NOUN | Number=Sing | 4 need | obl |
| 11 | , | , | PUNCT | _ | 12 ever | punct |
| 12 | ever | ever | ADV | PronType=Ind | 4 need | advmod |
| # | verb | tense, mood | who | what, whom | to whom | where | when | other | roles by |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | not need | present | Good writers | a second look | writers's work | ever | vn want-32.1-1-1 «NP V NP ADV»: agent=Pivot look=Theme | ||
| 2 | work | writers = writer | nom work «act intransitive»: poss=agent |
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